Responding to technical notes, from one filmmaker to another:
James Mills wrote:Lighting: not only do interior shots have the most blatant use of three point lighting I can remember seeing, but they're actually different temperatures and not balanced well! Look at every interior scene and the differences between warmth from not only the intended light sources on the filmic (lamps, outside windows, etc.), but from the actors themselves!
I swear I'm not trying to be snarky, but I'm honestly having a little trouble understanding what you're saying here because there are some grammatical problems with the last sentence. But if you're saying what I think you're saying (that the color temp of the actors' key lights is not balanced with the practicals?) I can only say I didn't notice it at the time. I haven't seen the film since I watched it in its theatrical run months ago, and it's entirely possible that if you pointed out specific shots I might see what you're saying and agree, but my immediate reaction is to say that having multiple color temperatures may actually be more realistic than a perfectly balanced lighting scheme. I do a lot of documentary work and event photography, and I know from lots of frustrated experience that most buildings actually do have lights with wildly variant color temperatures, very often in the same room. But again, all I can say is that nothing looked out of the ordinary to me at the time.
James Mills wrote:Some exterior scenes are equally laughable, as one of the worst is when they're looking through the graveyard for her father's name and all we can see from their subjective shots is the flashlight, with everything around it being completely black. But it constantly cuts back to them looking where it is obviously being lit up by an ulterior light source, and nothing is dark at all! How does one not notice these types of things?
I remember this scene well, and you're right about how different the shots are. I noticed it at the time, and I didn't think it was intentional. But the difference between you and me is that I noticed it and moved on, because I was more interested in what was going on than I was in what "mistakes" the cinematographer may or may not have been making. Would you have liked the film any more if this scene or others like it had not contained such flaws? That's the key question. I think there are some truly
great films in the history of cinema that have "terrible" lighting on a professional level; it doesn't make them less great. Moreover, I have a tendency to use the word "professional" as a pejorative and I shudder a bit when someone uses it to describe my work, because I always get the feeling it means I was concentrating on the wrong things. This is my long-winded way of saying, "Yes, the lighting in that scene was unprofessional, and you're right, I didn't care, even as a cinematographer."
Incidentally, you didn't mention the only scene that consciously bothered me, from a technical standpoint: in the climax on the pond, there were some shots where it looked as if the shutter speed had been altered, probably in order to gain an extra stop or so of light. If this had been happening throughout the film, it wouldn't have bothered me, but when it cropped up all of a sudden toward the end it felt to me like an outsider's intrusion into the very self-contained world of this film, and at one of its most intimate moments. This differs for me from the lighting problems of the graveyard scene, which don't feel like a violation of the aesthetic environment that has already been established.
James Mills wrote:Production design: all the clothes and props are brand new. They took no time in weathering any of the props, and when they did it was so half assed that it made it worse (slab of dusty dirt on a mint condition 90's truck). To punctuate this lack of professionalism, for instance: during the silly torture/kidnapping scene or whatever, rain is audible (though very poorly, as all the other sound design in the film, but I won't even get into that). When you look outside, however, "Teardrop's" mint condition truck has rain drops on it, but there is no rain. Yet it is raining. About three shots later when they arrive back, not only is it still "raining", but Teardrop's car is now completely dry and no rain is visible outside. Again, how is this excusable?
I think you're wrong about the clothes and props looking too new, but I can't mount a serious defense with the film not fresh in my memory. As to the problem you've mentioned with the rain and the truck, this sort of thing happens all the time in movies, old and new, and people have been excusing it for decades. As a filmmaker you probably would have noticed this no matter what, but I doubt it would have bothered you if you weren't already uninterested in the film anyway.
I honestly have no idea what you're talking about with the sound design, but I think the sound design in most modern (Hollywood) films is very overwrought and bombastic, so maybe this is a question of taste.
James Mills wrote:Editing: These huge flaws all have editing in common, but there are also fundamental errors throughout. Cutbacks between dialogue NEVER happen, whoever's talking is given the screen right when they start their sentence, thus continuity errors show up at least once per interaction. To make it worse, she actually cuts from the same angle at times to a mere medium shot from a flat two shot, which in filmmaking terms means you're admitting to have not got enough good footage of one interaction and are forced to break the cutting rules (30 degrees or extreme distance changes in every cut of dialogue) because of your poor direction.
It can also mean that you rightly believe these "cutting rules" are mostly arbitrary and need not be followed if the scene is still intelligible (or if it's important that the scene not be entirely intelligible). I'm actually kind of confused seeing this argument come from someone whose avatar is a shot from
The Conformist, a film that flagrantly and gleefully breaks such rules.
I can't argue with your personal experience with meth addicts, but I will say that I thought the dead-eyed and sort of flat manner of most of the characters in the film was all part of an intentional direction towards an aesthetic whole. The film itself has a cold, estranging character, as if the environment itself is staring you down with knives in its eyes, and the manner of acting from most of the characters is a key aspect of this effect. Indeed, it is precisely because Jennifer Lawrence remains steely and unphased throughout the film that she becomes compelling, since it contrasts sharply with what is otherwise an obvious physical and circumstantial vulnerability and brings her to the same level as her enemies in terms of the power she can wield.
James Mills wrote:the film is extremely, extremely unprofessional in all areas of technical aesthetics, and that is undebatable.
It's not at all undebatable, but even if I agreed with this assessment, why would that necessarily be a bad thing? Abbas Kiarostami's
Ten truly is "extremely unprofessional in all areas of technical aesthetics," and that fact is key to its brilliance. Most Hollywood films are highly professional, but it doesn't make them good. Professionalism is no guarantee of quality, value, ideas, or significance, and unprofessionalism is most certainly no indication of a lack of any of these things.
I think most of this discussion is beside the point, honestly, and I would be curious to see as detailed and thorough a response to Jeff's and Foam's counterarguments re: the film's authenticity, or to Domino's first reply to your post, the first two sentences of which very neatly capture what makes this film special, in my opinion. For what it's worth, I think you're wrong about
Winter's Bone and I have an initial impression that you and I approach cinema in general very differently, but I don't agree that you're whining for attention or being contrary just for the hell of it, and I don't think you've really earned the pile-on you've received.